Hi blog buddies I did a trench diary of what it might of been like in World War 1. I had to use my five senses to describe what it could have been like.
WALT describe using our senses
I can see People getting shot.
I can see People crying.
I can see People limping.
I can see people setting of bombs.
I can see people slipping.
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I can hear Bombs going off.
I can hear Talking .
I can hear people being shot.
I can hear people crying.
I can hear people huffing and puffing.
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I can taste the bitter rain.
I can taste the mud getting splashed .
I can taste the gross food.
I can taste the yuck muddy water.
I can taste the bugs that fly in my mouth.
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I can smell the mouldy food.
I can smell the gas.
I can smell the old feet..
I can smell the mud.
I can smell the smoke.
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I can feel the lice crawling all over me.
I can feel big rats.
I can feel the grip of my gun.
I can feel slimy mud .
I can feel my tears running down my face.
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I can not wait to go home.
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Will I come out of this okay?
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Hope you liked my work. I have to say it was quite hard because I was not in World War 1.
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