As the water whips my face I see another mountain we have to climb in our old rickety cart. "This water park has been around for so long I am surprised that we haven’t been killed by ghosts of something," says Zell“Yeah I was thinking the same,” follows Jane, "maybe there's like a haunted house around here that we could go to after we get off this old piece of wood..."
As the four children slowly approach the haunted house they see two eyes peer out the entrance, it happens again but this time it speaks.
"What are you doing here", the children are flabbergasted to find out that it could speak. " We are here to save the lost spirit" Announces Zell. "No We Aren't" declares Lilly. " anyway, we want to explore this place" exclaims Joan !
Then the peer of eyes said Creepily " come on in children, you will be just fine " To Be Continued.......
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